Feedback Responses

After gaining feedback from my previous Editor's Letter, I made another one that now makes more sense. Instead of just talking about being an editor of a magazine and making choices about the magazine layout, colours, etc, I decided to talk about my main headlining artist J Brown. I also talked more about the Hip Hop genre overall. I think this editor's letter is more effective and suits my magazine better. 

I also cleaned up my '(FEATURES)' text as it looked really messy. I used the select tool to select any bits that were making the text look unprofessional. It now looks much neater than it did before. 

I've moved the (FEATURES) text down to the bottom of the page. I think it looks better down here and doesn't distract you from the 'CONTENTS' text at the top.