What do you think of this magazine?
Feedback 1: I think it looks far too busy. There is too much text which makes it look unattractive. I don't like the red text underneath the pull quote.
Feedback 2: It's way too busy, too much text and not enough graphics. Take away some of the text and also, the 'J BROWN' text is very hard to read.
Feedback 3: I like the colour scheme but there is too much text on the page which makes it look really cluttered. You need a graphic to make it more attractive. Also, the text that says 'UK's HOTTEST HIP HOP MAGAZINE' isn't really nice. You should either change the font or not have it there.
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